The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/10
Really cool take on the topic. I liked how you drew the conflict out.
Great story. I just wish I knew how it all turned out. :)
12/10/10
You had me engaged the whole time, couldn't wait to see what happened. What happened? Good job!
This is a great story. I thought about doing a similar story. I'm glad I changed my mind. It would have paled next to yours. I felt so connected with the characters even with the missing girl. I like how you left it open-ended too. Genius work !
12/11/10
(My hint with this title would have related to Tom Cruise - but maybe that dates me LOL)

Definitely a creative take on the topic. At first I was confused about why it was bad she was seen with him months ago - but then I realized I didn't know how long she'd been missing. May have just been me.

Anyhow - I agree with Shann - you had me caring about the characters. Nice job!
I often wonder when I see those posters of missing persons if I'd ever recognize someone from the picture. Great exploration of this MC's experience in doing so. Good writing.