The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the concept. It felt a bit cut and dried - he read this, then this, then this. I would have liked more reaction from Hank, what was he thinking/feeling in response? SOmething to make me care about him as a character. The sign wars was a great idea for this topic.
Appreciate the concept. I can relate to being motivated by random news items to do on-line research. Amazing sometimes the rabbit trails one can follow, even taking one away from the intentioned restful afternoon. LOL! A reference to "song potential" kind of sidetracked me. Re-reading informed me Hank is a writer--I must've skimmed over that the first time. But it still didn't clue me in that he was into music until near the end when he hoped it would be "a hit".