The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/10
Masterfully told, Ann. I love the back and forth between today and grandpa. You absolutely transported me there. Thanks for the journey.
I agree with Jo. This could be expanded to a novel, I think. I wanted to know more about Grandpa and the experiences he went through.
12/14/10
I like how you went back and forth between your mc's romantic notions about the the wilderness and the reality of grandpa living it. I also agree that this should be allowed to grow into a novel. P.S. You most certainly didn't crash and burn. Your story was an absolute delight.
12/15/10
I love the two voices and the way you tied them together. Your descriptions brought me right into the story. Great job!
What a touching story. I loved it! Congratulations for placing in the top 12 of your level and the top 20 overall!
12/17/10
Yay, Ann! Top of Masters! (It didn't crash and burn. ;) )