The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/10
What an awesome concept for this topic. I got bogged down in the dialogue and felt like I didn't really get to know the characters, but your writing kept me going until the end. Well done!
I had a bit of the same struggle as Rachel did with the dialogue. It was hard for me to get into the story after the first couple of paragraphs but that may be because I've had opportunity to read a number of other versions of the Magi contemplating the star and my interest is lagging. I think you have a talent for using words though and look forward to reading other works you do.