The Official Writing Challenge
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The inspiration you derived from this theme is evident in your writing!
10/11/05
An interesting
"floral"perspective.
10/11/05
Wow. Some creative thought put into this one!
10/12/05
Catchy title. Loved your first line in particular. Successfully characterise the life and 'feelings' of flowers.
10/13/05
Very interesting perspective and great descriptions. I particularly loved the line "they tie our feet with a pitiless rope". There are a few small errors (such as where "in to" should be one word), but overall, a great story.
10/13/05
Flowers may not have voices per se, but when I gaze at the orange and white bouquet on my dining room table, they speak volumes! Nice story.
I will never look at flowers the same again. Wow! This would be a great object lesson for children and adults.
10/13/05
A very unique perspective- well done!
This is beautifully descriptive, and the perspective is inspired. I enjoyed reading this. God bless.
10/15/05
Unique perspective! Nicely done.