The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/10
I love your sense of irony.
You did a great job with this. Many people believe they can show the world they are Christians but only Christ knows what is truly in their hearts. Lovely poem.
12/15/10
I liked the message of your poem...sort of a "your actions speak so loud I can't hear what you're saying" story. Great flow, rhythm and rhyme as well.
Congratulations for placing 9th in your level!
12/20/10
Have just read this amazing poem Nancy - it is so good as well as being extremely challenging. Excellent verse, rhyme and scanning. Well done.
04/03/11
Nancy, I'm going to feature this poem on the Front Page Showcase for the week of April 4. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulaitons!