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12/09/10
Wonderful Story!! Very touching! I enjoyed reading it!
Enjoyed your story. Very appropriate for the topic.
12/10/10
I liked the story and message.

But I LOVED your opening paragraph. What a fantastic opening -- a big sharp hook that immediately set in my cheek!

The writing continued to captivate me through the end.
You did a great job on this article. Very well done!
12/12/10
Thoroughly enjoyable and thought provoking! Good job!
12/13/10
Warm and moving trip through the mind of your MC. Beautiful story that's tinged with pain and courage.
This is a great story. It would have been just as wonderful if the lady hadn't mysteriously disappeared. You did such an outstanding job getting into the mind of the girl. I became pregnant as a teen too and tried to rationalize abortion and everything else. It's funny I was so scared to tell my mom but after she got over the shock my patrents were so supportive. Now my daughter is 26. God does work miracles sometimes he uses people and sometimes he sends angels. Excellent story. I really enjoyed it and think it will do quite well!
12/15/10
I could feel what Beth was feeling...the cold, the pain, the fear, the doubt, the hope. Well done!