The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/10
Wow! This is suspenseful. I had to read it a couple times to take it all in. I wonder what's in the picture. Continued in the next chapter perhaps?
12/12/10
You have a lot building up here, and I would also to see a few extra chapters: one for the background and others to lead on from here. However, your pace and pictures add a very evocative feel to this story.
This was so suspenseful. I thought I might have missed what was on the posters so I read it again and realized it didn't really matter. How true that what is legal doesn't necessarily mean it is right. Great storytelling.
12/15/10
A powerful last line and the intriguing drama make this a great story. Well done.