The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the feel of this. Very relaxing. Great for the topic.
I sense the momentum of hope building in this story, even though you have not opened it very far. I'm interested in seeing it develop through a few more steps, because I think your pacing would allow for this.
This was lovely. It made me wish I could go home again back to my childhood. I liked how you brought the topic in so easily.
Good little poem. I like your image that life is a journey however I didn't feel like the signposts were central to the poem and I also couldn't grasp the hidden meaning behind the signs.
I liked the phrase "passing through country i've never met before." Reminds me of another saying, "Strangers are friends we've never met before." Interesting format and flow as well.
Congratulations on your EC!
I was thrilled to see your name on the list know I'm a fan of your poetry. This one was a beautiful example of pacing and tone. Lovely. Congrats on your EC.
Congratulations on your EC, Jim. I enjoyed taking your trip with you.
Jim, Congratulations on your EC win.
I liked the light easy feeling of this poem. Nicely done! Congratulations on your placing.
Beautifully written! Congrats on your Editor's Choice, Jim!