The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/10
This is beautiful, thought-provoking, and challenging to the reader. We are so quick to judge (sometimes unintentionally). Your poem cuts the heart like a knife, reminding me that all people deserve respect and have potential, if just given a chance. Very nice!!
12/12/10
So beautifully put. I work every day in a ministry that reaches out to the very ones you mention! Thanks for your heart and God bless!
12/16/10
Sounds just like the modern public school system, proclaiming that they are in the best interest of the children while teaching them lies.

Big congratulations on your win!!!
12/16/10
Wow, what a powerful poem. Congratulations on your EC!
Congratulations on your EC for your powerful poem...in Masters!
12/17/10
Super congrats on your Editor's Choice, Benjamin!