The Official Writing Challenge
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You packed a lot of story into only 750 words. The characters were quite unique and the descriptions a delight.
12/14/10
Interesting story with an unusual story line. Liked the name of the town. Thank you.
12/15/10
You have a lot going on in this fast-paced story. Interesting characters, for sure.