The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/10
You very accurately portrayed the attitude of fitfull siblings. I love the wisdom of the father, and the ending is just beautiful. Good job!
Sounds like a typical day in most houses! You took me by surprise in the end. Nice lesson.
12/06/10
This is a good story for Sunday School or Children's Church. Great story with a valuable lesson.
12/06/10
Such an accurate picture of family life in the fast lane, but with God's grace let loose to reduce the anger and short-circuit the revenge. Very enjoyable.