The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/10
I love your use of this story for the topic.. What better "body language" can we have than to express our faith. This is very nicely written!
Your words flowed so eloquently. You did a great job with this one.
This is a beautiful poetic adaption of one of my favorite bible stories! Great job!
12/06/10
I especially like the friendship angle you used at the end of the poem. Well-written poem with a great message.
12/06/10
Very inspiring pictures in your word selection, with a positive challenge tucked in as you wrap it up. Very well done.
12/08/10

A really good and true the scriptures rhyme. Spot on topic. Enjoyed! Thanks!
12/08/10
I've never thought of Moses' raising his hands as a sign of prayer before. Thanks for the food for thought! This is beautifully written and the title is perfect.
Congratulations for placing 9th in your level!