The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem. The last verse really touched me. It reminds me of the saying Jesus loves you this much then He died. You told the truth in your lovely flow of rhymes.
A very good poem! Well written.
12/07/10
This is brilliant in its simplicity and its challenge.
Congratulations for placing 9th in your level and 13th overall!