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I enjoyed the suspense in thus charming tale. I wasn't sure if the MC would be able to keep quiet but I'm glad she did. It's hard to feel like you're losing a friend. Nice job.
A perfect story to apply the saying, "If you can't say anything nice, don't say it at all." She was wise in holding her comments to body language in this case.
12/06/10
Great title, perfect for this story. I agree, good body language. I could see it all while reading this story.
Your title goes well with your story. I really felt for your MC. Great way to describe the body language of restraint. Keep writing.
12/06/10
This couldn't have a better title! I felt a real connection in this piece ;-) Great writing!