The Official Writing Challenge
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I literally laughed out loud when I read this.

Great article!
This is priceless! I laughed all the way through. I must confess ... I didn't see the mouse coming. I think I was enjoying myself to much. Great job!
12/03/10
This is indeed absolutely priceless! Loved it - thanks!
Excellent in everyway. I knew there was a reason I didn't write a poem this week. You need to venture into these woods more often. Your talent here is more than a fancy. This would be a standing "O" in any poetry house. I would pay to listen to you read it. I enjoyed this very, very much! My favorite line was: "As he reeled through a waltz quite demented."
Beyond the sphere of good.
12/03/10
Hehe This is really cute. :) I like it.
This is awesome! Did not see the reason coming for the wild behavior. Hilarious!
Pure delight!
I don't know if I can stop laughing long enough to type a comment! I loved it!
This is a really funny, good poem. I enjoyed reading it.
12/06/10
I'm still giggling as I type this. Fantastic! You should do poetry more often.
12/07/10
I can just hear Doctor Phil asking: "Waltz were you thinking????"
Totally enjoyable.
12/07/10
I have read many stories this week and I must say this is at the top of my list. Funny, entertaining, visual, good rhythm and rhyme. A mouse no less. This poem has everything.
12/07/10
Superb! Your word choice was absolutley divine! I wasn't sure where you were heading - was the man possessed I wondered? A mouse? Genius!
12/08/10
Hilarious and witty, and how I do so love that rhyming! I could just imagine the stern-faced pastor. This should earn a high ranking indeed!
oh ann this is PRICELESS!!!!