The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/10
This is a great story with a wonderful ending. The only thing that threw me off a little was the witch's prompt turn-about at the end. I would have expected to see more reluctance in her repentance, at least at first. But I sure did love the way her trick backfired.
Good job!
What a delightful story. I chuckled here and there and realized the message is really for parents who think by giving their children everything one could dream of that they are doing them a favor. What a wonderful way to tell such an importent message!