The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/10
Such lovely words...beautiful expression with a great last stanza.
12/03/10
Very nicely written & focused use of the topic. Avoiding the rhyme w/ your last word created an interesting jolt to underscore your point well.
12/05/10
I love the beautifully open-hearted nature of this piece. Your structure is very clear but it doesn't intrude on your message.
Simply beautiful!
Congratulations on your third place ribbon!
12/09/10
Delores - Congrats on your third place showing in Advanced. Way to go!
12/09/10
Dolores, congratulations on your third placing. Great achievement.