The Official Writing Challenge
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What a fun take on the topic! Great characters and descriptions in here.
I loved the line "waiting to shape up what age had added on." Great story, fun to read, good visualization.
This was so much fun to read!!! Good job.
I enjoyed this light take on a heavy subject. Great song too.
This was a delight. It had me smiling the whole way through. I even want to get up and exercise. I probably won't but at least you created a desire in me to exercise!