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12/02/10
This is a clear invitation to participate in God's heartbeat for broken people, because only His grace can work the miracles they need. Excellent approach.
12/03/10
Folks could learn a lot from your first paragraph...you visually captured what this woman was feeling and suffering. Powerful descriptions of her body language. Sounds like God sent the right caring person at the right time to help her.
Beautiful. There's so much behind those eyes. A story that many would be shocked to hear. The prayer was lovely.
12/06/10
What a beautiful piece.

I hope this piece somehow finds its way to the ears of someone suffering with such an affliction. I can only imagine it would have a postitive influence.