The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, so sweet and sad. I like your unique take on this week's challenge. Your flow and rhythm were good. If you have a local human society, you might want to submit this for their newsletter (if they have one)...lots of puppy lovers would enjoy reading it.
Awww. How sad. I'm sorry for the loss of your pet. :( I like the poem, though. :)
Yes, one immediately thinks of body language in terms of the human body. So, this is definitely an "out of the box" approach to the topic.
Sorry about your puppy. I liked your poem. Could see the puppy wagging his happy tail.
I knew this was going to hurt before I read it, but it still got me. I am sure it was therapeutic writing it.
A lovely, sweet and cute poem. Keep writing (and poems!).
Part of me was hoping you'd take both puppies but at the very least I wanted you to pick the right one. This is a sweet poem. Sometimes the one that might be the cutest might not be the right one.
So sweet! Makes me miss all the pets I've lost through the years. I love the unique take on the topic.