The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/10
Oh, so sweet and sad. I like your unique take on this week's challenge. Your flow and rhythm were good. If you have a local human society, you might want to submit this for their newsletter (if they have one)...lots of puppy lovers would enjoy reading it.
12/03/10
Awww. How sad. I'm sorry for the loss of your pet. :( I like the poem, though. :)
12/03/10
Yes, one immediately thinks of body language in terms of the human body. So, this is definitely an "out of the box" approach to the topic.
Sorry about your puppy. I liked your poem. Could see the puppy wagging his happy tail.
I knew this was going to hurt before I read it, but it still got me. I am sure it was therapeutic writing it.
12/04/10
A lovely, sweet and cute poem. Keep writing (and poems!).
Part of me was hoping you'd take both puppies but at the very least I wanted you to pick the right one. This is a sweet poem. Sometimes the one that might be the cutest might not be the right one.
12/06/10
So sweet! Makes me miss all the pets I've lost through the years. I love the unique take on the topic.