The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/10
You have captured a wide range of feelings and reflections in a warm, well-told story. You may have stepped around the actual topic by emphasising a depth of communication without using a phone, but maybe I'm being a bit picky.
11/29/10
Good job on this father son story. Sad ending. Thank you.
Even though this is a sad story it's also an incredibly sweet one. I can easily feel the love and respect between father and son. It was beautiful.
Congratulations in placing 7th in and 15th overall.