The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
I just about fell off my chair laughing at this: “Sorry, I have to go…the milk’s getting sour.”I'll have to remember that one! Nicely done.
11/28/10
Doesn't God have a great sense of humor? Loved the self-deprecating touch in this entry. Excellent work.
12/01/10
Sounds a lot like my life. You described the MC's feelings really well. And I enjoyed the ending. Good job!
12/02/10
Congratulations on placing 10th in level 4.