The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
Well done.
11/28/10
Your story reminded me of the
Gossip topic. After Grammy's call, I found the plot somewhat predictable. Still, realistic dialogue and characterization.
I enjoyed this story, and the way you pictured the old telephone. I had a little trouble following who was saying what, but that didn't stop your story from being fun. Well done!