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11/25/10
A sad and drastic story. One which so many have lived through the years, and many know nothing of.

A gripping story. well done.
Very intense story -- I could see it as it happened as you told it so wonderfully. Such a sad ending.
11/27/10
I know this pain. It is much the same as my life's story. My father's passed; my mother at 87 lives a life secluded from us by her choice of releigion. Sadly, she doesn't know how close to Jesus her children are. She thinks we're lost because we're Christians and serving in church. So, your writing is spot on with its sad, helpless, feeling. Thank you for sharing.
Mona
I had a feeling it was a cult. The goosebumps on my arm were my first clue. You did a great job showing how a fake religion can grab hold of people and pull them under.
You did a good job writing this sad story. I only wish there had been more at the end. Thank you.
12/02/10
Very well done, Connie.