The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful use of the phone! I've heard of places like this. You made the characters so real and it touched my heart.
11/27/10
I enjoyed this. I love stories of reconciliation. Great use of the topic.
12/01/10
Aww, what a great story for the Thanksgiving/Christmas season! I enjoyed reading about the unusual business that the MC worked for (very creative) and seeing how she used prayer to remind her to be patient and thankful. (I pray the same way many times ... including getting more opportunities to carry out that patience than I bargained for. ;) )

Awesome job! Touching and out-of-the-box.
Congratulations in placing 10th in level 3.
12/03/10
Congrats on placing in the top rankings! Awesome job.