The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a cute story. I'm sure many of us can relate in one way or another. Nice job.
Good job. I like the descriptions of the dancing. Thank you.
You wrote this one really well. I felt like I was there, seeing everything that happened. Your characters were interesting and seemed lifelike. I enjoyed how you drew the telephone into the story. Good job!
Great snapshot entry that's full of life and credibility. Very enjoyable reading.
I really like this, Amanda! I thought you did a great job bringing this story to life!