The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/10
Very well done! I like this. Thank you.
11/29/10
This is wonderfully done. Creative and a great meter and message. Thanks!
11/30/10
Great job. I liked this! Some very good reminders in here.
12/01/10
Excellent poem. Your rhythm and rhyme were exceptional. The message rings true. This should sit well with the judges too. It's one of my favorites, for sure.
This is so beautiful and every word of it is the truth.
12/01/10
Excellent verses to go with such beautifully written poem! God is certainly never too far or too busy on the 'phone' for us to get through to connect with Him!
12/02/10
Carol, just wanted to add a note to what I've already said...it's tough being a judge and they do an awesome job...just the same, IF I were a judge this would have placed in the top five at least. It's still one of my favorites.