The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/10
Children imitate. We never know where lessons will come from. Good job. Thank you.
11/29/10
The end TOTALLY took me by surprise. Clever message there.
12/01/10
I liked the title of your story. The story didn't disappoint either...great characters, good dialogue and a strong message. Good job all around.
This brings tears to my eyes. There are so many young mothers who think cleaning the house is more important than spending quality time with their kids. Of course you can't have the best time with your kids if you don't make time for Jesus too. Nice message, kids certainly do have a way of getting right to the point.
This brings tears to my eyes. There are so many young mothers who think cleaning the house is more important than spending quality time with their kids. Of course you can't have the best time with your kids if you don't make time for Jesus too. Nice message, kids certainly do have a way of getting right to the point.
Congratulations on placing 11th on level 3.