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This was so full of suspense right to the end. My only "beef" is that it felt incomplete at the end. Perhaps you are planning a sequel?????
A bomber with a heart - and a son. I liked this a lot. A sequel will work well but it stands alone nicely. Good job!
Excellent. I think I would have left off the final line. But it works well and honours those whose lives have been cruelly snatched away
This is full of suspense. The MC is a relatable guy something I didn't quote expect but in truth we are all people someone's child or parent or sibling. You did a great job with this one.
Wow, I like how you captured the story from the POV of a Muslim bomber. I was drawn into the scene, totally intrigued. I could feel the seconds ticking away and was hoping that somehow the Christians could escape before it was too late.

This is a great tribute to martyrs for the Kingdom.

It would be cool to see a sequel about God working in the bomber's heart after what he did. I will echo that comment from others. ;)
Very well written. Excellent work.
Congratulations in placing 8th in level 4 and 18th overall.
Yay! You're in the top rankings! Awesome job as usual. ;)