The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
Love the title (a pretty good give-away) as it happened. It was fascinated up until: "her royal highness of flannel" and then the story got predictable.

Nonetheless, it's a good story and that last line is something we should all remember when faced with someone obnoxious.
11/27/10
I liked your sobering close, whether it was for Frankie - or for us.
11/29/10
Loved the title! This belies
most of what I was taught about the gentle approach to soul-winning.:-)
Glad this had a happy ending. Good job!