The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/10
Interesting story. Good dialogue. Thank you.
I just love your stories. You write what I like to read-- about realistic characters that could easily be someone I know. You do such a good job of pulling me into the story and long for more. Yet this story easily stands on its own merit. Great job!
12/01/10
Once again, you pulled me in with the high drama and intrigue. The dialogue was strong. The complete story line is great and Ican't wait cuz' I know the climax is just around the corner. Well done.
Great suspense! This story is FILLING me with anxiety for both Jim and Rachel. I am SO grateful there is one more story to read until I'll have to wait another week in complete frustration! :)