The Official Writing Challenge
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I could really visualize the slapstick comedy going on in the telephone booth. Thank goodness for a happy ending. I was "rooting" for Rosie!
Cute story. Good descriptions of the costumes and telephone booth goings on. Thank you.
Something different for a change—a comical take on the topic! Glad Grandpa spared Rosie from the slaughter. LoL.
Lovely tale! Ada's ideal retirement plan for Rosie sounds like the perfect retirement plan for me too. But I wonder, is it possible for a stay-at-home mother and want-to-be writer to retire?

Loved the descriptive detail and the telephone booth entanglement scene was hilarious. This scene wrapped the theme and story together beautifully.

Nicely done.
I thoroughly enjoyed this delightful story...the humor in the story was perfection. Great imagery, especially when they were tangled up in the phone box.
I so enjoyed this lovely story. It would make a delightful picture book. I'm pleased to say other than the towns I knew the other references and they added to the quaintness of the story.
This threatened to be sow boar-ing, but you added some life and fun to it. Well done.
Congratulations on an EC for your fun story.
Hearty congrats
Congratulations on your EC! I hope you turn it into a picture book. It would be perfect!
And you were worried...

Good job on the posting. A well done entry.
I knew this one would do well. Congratulations on your EC.
Looks like the threats to give you a good slapping worked :-) Well done, Chrissy, well done!!
Chrissy, Super congrats on your Editor's Choice award for this entry!
Haha, enjoyed it. The beginning was a lot like the opening of Charlotte's Web, but loved the "dragon" tangled in the telephone booth.
I guess the Chicken got the worst end of the deal. lol Well done.