The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
Whoa, that was totally unexpected! I could almost feel myself expelling my breath in relief to discover that there wasn't a brutal husband about to beat your MC to a pulp.
11/27/10
And I thought it the special bond between grandparents and grandchildren came from having a common enemy!!!
Great suspense and a terrfifc rug-puller at the end.
11/27/10
Let's try "terrific!" ...
Completely unexpected ending. Well done.
11/30/10
Golden!