The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/10
A somber topic gracefully handled. Favorite passage: "it was him, it was love, it was wonderful.
they would talk and talk
not about anything, anything much,
but the sound of their voices felt like kisses of sound." Very nice!
11/27/10
Excellent poetry. Flowed so well. Got the topic in there. Great message. Beautiful images.
What more can I say. I really enjoyed it. It should do very well.
11/28/10
Splendid piece, on topic and pulls at the heart. Good job.
11/29/10
I'll be dusting off the dictionary in a few minutes...halcyon. (Once I know what it means, it'll be my word for the day.) Great poem with strong imagery.
Oh how sweet and how sad at the same time.
11/30/10
Bang on topic. Beautifully written. Should do well!
Congratulations in placing 6th in level 3 and 11th overall. Oh so close to an EC. Keep writing I so enjoy your work!