The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. I liked how you turned the reporter around from an invader to an advocate. You did a great job of pulling me into the story but there's so much more I want to know. Leaving those questions unanswered just emphasizes your message that the world doesn't need to know every little detail of another's tragedy. Great writing !
11/18/10
Excellent window onto both sides of how the news is gathered. you've also depicted both sides of your MC, with at times breathless energy and action, coupled with the quiet but active asssurance that God is ultimately in control. Very well done.
Very well done. Pulled me into the story quickly & kept me there to the end.
This was a creative approach to the topic. I was curious as to why the couple was being villified. Your title was perfect for your message.
11/21/10
I haven't counted the words, bu I sure wish you'd had enough left to let us in on the tragedy.:-) Lot's of descriptive action.
I, too, would have liked to have known what all the trouble was about. Still, even without knowing, I enjoyed the way your MC wanted to help the couple and desired to lead them to the Lord. Good story with a great message!