The Official Writing Challenge
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The staccato pace was perfect for the messages in your poem.
Wow it always fills me with awe when I read such powerful words in the form of a poem. Amazing job!
11/20/10
Staccato was exactly the word I was thinking while reading this. Well done.
11/22/10
Excellent writing! An interesting approach to putting across what the media reports most of the time. Sounds there are more bad news than good, which is usual of the media. This poem makes it very clear why we should do our part to keep people up to date with the right stuff—the good news.
11/24/10
I thought this was a good overall view of the sorts of things reported in the media. It has a nice flow too.