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A modern day slant on a familiar Bible story conveyed in an interesting manner. Good writing.
Love the slight tongue-in-cheekiness, or maybe not quite so slight? But definitely cheeky. I can see this sketch being used at a youth group event of some sort. Good writing. (one red ink spot, a typo: Peter was singing to the mice and then apparently they became hard-of-hearing for a moment? ;-))
Great take on the story.
I don't understand what you mean by *beat*.
Love the humor.
This was a delightful read. I really got into the story and the characters. I did notice at one point instead of singing to the mice he was signing to the mice which gave me a nice visual chuckle too. Great job.
This was a lot of fun to read, especially after I've told this story to my Children's Church kids so often. Great job!
11/22/10
Energetic, creative and fun approach to a well-known story. A couple of typos did not detract from your overall message.
11/22/10
What a fresh way to look at that story. Lots of humor. This could easily be a teen drama sketch. Well done.