The Official Writing Challenge
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Hat a charming second-time around love story. You drew me in with your gentle characters. Well done.
11/21/10
Warm, nostalgic material without getting too sentimental. I like the time shifts and the changes you've included with each one.
11/22/10
Very nicely done. The characters came to life for me.
11/23/10
I enjoyed reading this story from both perspectives. You did a great job developing your characters. Sometimes sweet, gentle, quiet stories are quite powerful. I know this one is..."classic" is a good description of the story.