The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a nice job reporting the news of the Lord's birth.
This built up my curiosity and I enjoyed the creativity of secular stance in your approach to the story. Sadly the word limit compressed your great build-up, so you were rushed at the end. There's another flow-on story here but, with our next topic referring to telephones, I guess we'll have to wait a little longer. Very enjoyable read.
As it's been said, the ending was a let-down. I was all into it until the last paragraph of two. Nevertheless, a nice modern touch to the "scoop" of all times.