The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the premise of this story, though I found the production of it a little confusing. There seem to be some gaps in the flow, with information missing (like a character suddenly talking to someone, but we don't know who). There also are a lot of grammar issues. However, I love Biblical fiction and enjoyed the twist of using Biblical times news runners for the "media" topic.
This is a great twist on the typical media piece. I really enjoyed it.