The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the great creative names! You had me chuckling while delivering a good message. Nice writing. Vulture TV-- love it!!
11/20/10
In places your style and your character names run parallel to John Bunyan's Pilgrim's Progress. A lively approach to media intrusion.
11/21/10
“A flood of knowledge dilutes the pursuit of truth."
This line me of a saying my mother used to say. "Believe little of what you hear, and half of what you see." Great line and a unique take on the topic.
11/21/10
Faux pas..."line reminds me.."
11/23/10
I'm glad to see Reticence is still alive. Sure hope he gets healthy and soon. Although, as you so adequately pointed out, there's not much hope for his future. I like your unique approach to the topic. Lots to ponder and chew on. "Deep" is a good adjective to describe this piece. Well done.
11/25/10
I enjoyed reading this story very much. It has all the good stuff that draws readers to want to continue reading from start to end. Lots of truth in your story about intrusion of privacy—that’s what the media does best. Excellent writing!