The Official Writing Challenge
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This is definitely a different take on the topic. I like how the detective got caught up in the closed circuit TV much like one does with Reality TV. At times I felt a tad confused feeling you were hindered by the word limit. Your characters were interesting and they all drew me into their reality. :)
I agree that the story seems larger than the word limit allows you, but the crossover from reality TV to CCTV was an interesting approach that you bult with strong credibility.
An interesting plot, but would be better if written to 'show' rather than 'tell' the story. Just work a little more to engage the reader into the story and you'll have a good start leading to the next chapters.