The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/10
You made me fall in love with this couple in their 80's too. I could see this perfectly and was smiling the whole time. Their relief in hearing of their daughters safety was tangible! This truly was "Simply Marvelous!" :)
11/12/10
It's amazing how modern technology has made the world much smaller.

I love this couple, too. You really brought them to life for us.
This story gave me a warm feeling for the joy of the older couple at knowing their daughter and family were okay. I really like the way you tied it to the pastor and wife.
11/14/10
What a sweet, loving couple, and a lovely, awesome story written about them. Kudos to you, my friend!
What a great use for modern technology. This was lots of fun to read. Good job!
11/16/10
Favorite line: He’d do just about anything for his bride. Even learn how to send electronic mail.

This is excellent! I love seeing how cyber communication has been a blessing.

Congratulations for placing 26th overall.