The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
This is great! I love the splash of intrigue! I want to know what happens next :)
09/19/05
Wow! Loved the detail and suspense.
09/19/05
Good job! This was very original; I loved the bit about the "three blinks." Keep it up!
09/21/05
This demands to be a novel. I hope some day it will be. Good job!
09/21/05
Good intrigue. Future events don't hold much hope and you've captured that here.
09/22/05
Wonderful storytelling! I was hooked. Oh - and way to go on the POV (no changes! Woo-hoo! LOL)
Loved it - great job!
Blessings, Lynda
09/22/05
You grabbed my interest and kept me hooked through the entire story. Great job!
09/22/05
As I got to the end I realized I was holding my breath! Great story!
09/23/05
Wow! I liked the significance of the red rose, too. Very touching!
09/23/05
What an awesome story!! I hope this gets expanded!
09/23/05
Very interesting... good job. Blessings, Amy Verlennich
09/25/05
All of the above. Good work. Looking forward to reading more of this one day - perhaps a novel :)
09/25/05
I agree, this would make a great book! Good job. I love the three blinks, too. :-)