The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/10
Mmmmmm. Terrifying account of todays communications, but all too real. First sentence needs grammatical corrction, perhaps just leave out the comma. otherwise well done.
This is so sad it breaks my heart. It does remind me to have another etiquette talk with my kids though. Hopefully they remember the rule that the cell phone gets ignored when you are visiting someone but a reminder is always good.
11/16/10
I've often seen kids who can't seem to tear their eyes off of a phone screen, so this rings true. Zinger last line.