The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked where you went with this delightful story! You could have taken a couple of predictable paths but I'm glad you went in the direction you did. Great story and a wonderful cast of characters.
11/15/10
Nicely written piece and very interesting read. Although it may be time for a change, sometimes not changing may be better. No doubt cyber communication has its draw and advantages, but if it leads one the other way round, it is best not to get too deep into it. Great job on the story plot.
Congratulations for placing 12th in level 3!