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Topic: Cyber Communication (email, IMâ€™s, etc) (11/04/10)
TITLE: I Didn’t Know You Were…
By Sarah Elisabeth
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Bleep. A chat box with Darren Henderson popped up.
Darren: hey candace! whatâ€™s up?
Wow, hadnâ€™t heard anything on that kid since our good olâ€™ days in 4-H. I didnâ€™t have time to chat, but how rude was it to ignore? I shouldâ€™ve put my chat offline first.
Candace: Just getting ready for a meeting. What are you up to these days?
Darren: iâ€™m in iraq
His words were like pressing the shutter button of a camera. I was the picture for five seconds.
Darren: iâ€™m a police officer in the air force
Candace: Okay, seriously, I didnâ€™t even know you were in the military!
Candace: Wow, how long have you been over there?
Darren: almost a year. i come home in january
What could I say to someone who was protecting the freedom of our country? My freedom?
Candace: Whatâ€™s it like? Is anything the news media says true?
Darren: lol, i donâ€™t know, we donâ€™t watch it much. what are they saying?
Candace: Nothing important. What made you decide to join?
Darren: idk, to do something different. an adventure. itâ€™s a little more than i thought. man, itâ€™s hot!
Candace: haha, Iâ€™ll bet. Texas summers had to prepare you some though ;-)
Darren: yeh, but not really. The sand gets in everything!
Candace: So what exactly do you do?
Darren: i patrol the base and keep everyone in line
Candace: lol, who keeps you in line?
Darren: i keep myself in line
Candace: true. My mom says she remembers you were always responsible. She said to tell you hi!
Darren: hi to her!
Darren: iâ€™ve lost like 20 pounds since i joined. have you seen my pics on here?
Candace: not yet. Hang on, my computerâ€™s freezing up
Candace: okay, itâ€™s going now
Candace: dude! Whatâ€™s with the tattoo?
Candace: So, do you need anything?
Darren: well, i could always use some snacks, magazines. stuff like that.
Candace: what address do I send them to?
It took a few seconds before Darren posted the address which I copied into a Word doc and saved. Magazine titles began rolling around in my head. He was always into hunting and fishingâ€¦
Darren: how is everyone there? any small town excitement?
Candace: haha, you know us, a regular party town, lol. County Fair just ended, made me think of all the good times we had as kids
Darren: yeah that seems like a lifetime ago
Candace: man, I just canâ€™t believe youâ€™re in Iraq! Must be tough â€“ I couldnâ€™t imagine
Darren: yeah, itâ€™s kinda hard sometimes. A friend of mine was killed by a roadside bomb a few weeks ago. You just learn to move on
Candace: Iâ€™m so sorry to hear that. You take care of yourself!
Darren: i do
I swallowed down the lump that came with my tears. I was glad this wasnâ€™t a phone conversation.
Darren. A few years my junior, but he still seemed like a kid to me. And good kid he was. I couldnâ€™t be prouder.
Darren: well, i gotta go. time to eat and stuff
Candace: Okay, it was awesome chatting with you! Hey Darren?
Candace: thanks for your service. Iâ€™m proud of you. We all are
Candace: Weâ€™ll be praying for you!
Darren: thanks! canâ€™t wait to see you guys when i get home!
Candace: us too! Take care of yourself
Darren: thanks for chatting with me. bye!
Candace: see ya soon
Darren is offline.
A minute passed before I took a breath. I was thankful I hadnâ€™t missed this opportunity by putting my chat offline. Even if it made me a few minutes late to the meeting.
I clicked on the document with Darrenâ€™s address and made a list:
Magazines (hunting, fishing)
Thank you card
Only a few days had passed when I took Darrenâ€™s box to the post office. They sent me home with an extra form to fill out. With everything in order, it shipped. I wondered how long it would take to reach him. I hoped it made it safely. I hoped he was safe.
A month later the notification from Facebook Iâ€™d been waiting for appeared.
Darren Henderson wrote on your wall:
hey guys! thanks so much for the box!!! so awesome!!!!! canâ€™t wait to see yâ€™all!!!!!!!!
Author Note: This story is based on an actual Facebook chat with a US soldier serving in Iraq
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