The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your twist. Like the son I was silently screaming no don't fall for it! I even felt relief in the end. Great job!!
11/14/10
Having "won" millions of dollars from scams based in Nigeria and other countries, I was hearing a variety of alarm bells. I like how you built the tension and closed with a happy ending.
11/16/10
Fun story with a happy ending. Good writing.
11/17/10
Loved the twist, loved the dad, loved the story. Good job!
Congratulations for placing 11th in level 3!