The Official Writing Challenge
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09/21/05
This is different, quirky, and funny. I liked it.
09/23/05
What an unusual entry! I enjoyed it especially
"Adult #4 – People think babies are slippery. I’ve known writers who’ve written entire articles on bathing their babies and clutching them like muddy footballs. I believe the contrary, that the older children get, the more slippery they become, until one day your trying to capture them is like embracing fog. I remember every game I was asked to play and didn’t because I was trying to get an idea out of my head and onto paper before it vanished. Maybe that’s why she never calls…"

I've had converstations like that LOL
Definitely different, but fun and a great read! Liked the way you re-introduced hotels in the last paragraph. It linked it all together. Keep writing!
I love it and I'm sending it to my best friend now.